Prompt:
Summarize about what has happened in the book so far.
Pages
Read: 50-85
After
Josh gained back conciseness he decided not to take his base and go for the
home run that could decide if they will be going to the Cooperstown travel
tournament. As Josh steps up to the plate he saw the look on the pitchers face
that almost maid him laugh. The first pitch is delivered STRIKE ONE Josh didn't
even swing the second pitch is delivered this time Josh swings big but just
misses STRIKE TWO. The third pitch is delivered it was a curveball but
Josh read the pitch all the way and swung with all his might and sends the ball
past the fence and sends the ball into the mountains a 2 run homer to put his
team the Titans up by one.
The next
batter strikes out in three pitches and the Titans take the field for the last
time in the game. Amazingly after Josh getting beamed in the eye with a 65-mile
an hour curveball he is also capable of taking the field. The pitcher for the
titans walked the first batter and the second but the third batter grounders
the ball right at the second basemen and the second basemen digs the ball right
up of the ground and the Titans turn a game changing double play. Since the
Titans were turning a double play the runner was able to advance from second to
third. It comes down to the very pitcher that beamed Josh in the head
Planczeck. The pitch is delivered and Planczeck hits a solid pop fly behind
Josh and Josh made a pretty much impossible catch to win a game for the
Titans.
After the
Titans picked up Josh and carried him of the field his parents had to rush him
to the emergency room to make sure there is no permanent damage to the eye.
They get a doctor to take a look at josh right away and after taking multiple
tests such as X-rays, MRIs, and eye sight tests the doctors finally came to the
conclusion that Josh had cracked the bone behind the eye that keeps the eye on
place. The options were to either let the bone heal naturally which would mean
that Josh would not be able to participate in the Cooperstown tournament and
the second option is to have surgery to help heal the bone faster but the one
risk is that in the proceeded goes wrong it could lead to permanent damage to
the eye. This is where Josh has to make the hardest decision of his life.
Gabe -
ReplyDeleteThis is not a summary; instead this is a detailed account about everything that happened. A summary highlights the main points of what occurs. Let's try to focus on a one paragraph summary and then another prompt for the other two paragraphs.
Good job! This is a very good restatement of what happened but it is not really a summary. You should chose a different prompt if you didn't read enough pages to do a summary.
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