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I think the most important event was when Hector Drew's best friend gave life to a died corpse to find where they took Gretchen. This kind of thing giving people life again was outlawed and was illegal through the 11 realms and that you can get arrested for doing it. The corpse they were rising from the died was one of the lion lords that abused Drew whenever he had a chance.
Another resign why it was so important was because now they know that the lion lord took Gretchen. If they didn't give him life then they wouldn't where to look or go to try and find Gretchen. So if they didn't do that then the story would just drag and will take a long time for them to find out where they had to go to find her. The bad thing was that he will always have a mark on his had that is proof that he this evil thing.
The last reason why it was so important was because it put suspense into the book. When he was raising the man he was moaning in pain and he was not feeling good. Also This kind of magic has had a history of backfiring on the man that controlled the corpse and sometimes the corpse goes crazy. The another thing was that the corpse started yelling in pain like it was still alive and hector was stuck in the middle of the afterlife and the real world and Drew had to slap him to get him out of the trance.
Those sound like important events. Good job. Next time make sure you fix any grammar or spelling errors so Mrs. Larson doesn't take off points.
ReplyDeleteGood choice of an important event. You are very descriptive but have some spelling and grammar errors.
ReplyDeleteGabe,
ReplyDeleteThat does seem like a very important part in the story. I liked how you said if a certain event didn't happen then the story would drag on for a long time. This reminded me of when me and Marisa went apple picking last year. We got lost in a corn maze, and if we didn't get out of there when we eventually saw a way out (it wasn't the exit) then we probably would've been searching for the exit for a really long time! Again, your important event was a good choice and I think you had excellent reasons to support why you thought it was an important event. Though next time, make sure you check your spelling and grammar so you don't get points taken off.